This Young Master Has Enemies: A Cultivation Fantasy (Tianyi, Book 2)

This story is so much fun! The Eastern mannerisms and dialogue can get a bit “thick” and I recommend reading the book at the same time you listen to the audiobook. If you go that way.The story gets even more interesting with them. Especially with the big meeting and then we get some more lore as Tianyi gets sucked into the Immortal Court. Some shocking truths are revealed! Especially with something that he recognizes from his past life. I won’t ruin it but for me, I love it when authors connect certain aspects of our history and lore that have impacted civilization enough that we still “feel it” now. Even if people don’t even realize it.I love Daoyi and it looks like the author is going to keep her relevant, even if she isn’t constantly “on stage.”We also get to see Daoyi make some pretty big changes/choices that I hope will have a ripple effect down the line in a positive light.I look forward to the next book making it to audible. The narrators continue to do a good job even though the strange eastern style of verbal and mental processes are different from how those of us on the western side of the globe. I actually find it interesting and I am not complaining about it.I am excited to see how some of the “seeds” planted in this book propagate in the future sequels!

CAUTION: Spoilers in review after 2nd paragraphThere’s some typos and sentence fragments that seem like points where the author removed previously written content but didn’t fully remove everything. The book continues to be an interesting and somewhat different take on cultivation and isekai. I rather like that this series doesn’t drag out being at a certain realm for 30 books and actually explores the higher ends of the universe.Where the author lost a star from me was mainly the typos, sentence fragments, and some hanging plot points or where obvious clues were dropped that any semi attentive reborn soul/isekai type protagonist would notice, especially given that the protagonist of this series does seem to be at least somewhat genre savvy.SPOILERS AHEAD STOP READING NOW TO AVOID......For example it’s pretty obvious from the XiYi Talisman (cultivation universe cell phones/smart phones) development subplot that Xi Ri and Daoyi are both reincarnated from Earth just as Tianyi is, and all 3 should have at least suspicions of the other two being reincarnated. Xi Ri suggests that the talismans are “wireless”, Daoyi says that she can make ringtones for the talismans and that they should record “music videos”, and Tianyi refers to the cards he develops as being formations that people can “download” to their XiYi Talismans to give them additional functions/spells. The references these 3 use all scream as references to earth smart phones and should be obvious red flags for reincarnated people living in a cultivation universe.As is pointed out in the novel, talismans don’t have or involve wires, and it’s implied that wires wouldn’t be at all related to talismans or communications formations/spells, so someone from this universe probably wouldn’t even think the term “wireless” exists. Video doesn’t exist in this universe, someone from it would logically call this concept a form of “illusion”. “Downloading” is a term popularized by the computer age and wouldn’t make sense to anyone not familiar with computers, so logically in a universe without computers, “downloading” wouldn’t make any sense to use. I believe someone from this universe with no knowledge of earth technology would likely refer to the adding of additional functions to a formation/artifact as “merging”, “grafting”, “adding”, “enhancing”, “processing” (this term seems to be used in the book to refer to the taking in of pills, artifacts, items, etc during cultivation), or even “passing on an inheritance” (since it seems like that’s the phrase used to refer to having techniques or manuals directly added to someone’s mind).This is really the biggest reason I docked a star. The protagonist repeatedly references isekai and cultivation novels as a motivation for doing different things, such as helping out the random guy on that continent and giving him the spear art he got from the immortal’s inheritance, because to him it seemed like he was stealing a cultivation novel protagonists fortuitous encounter for himself. Tianyi even notes that he keeps encountering people with protagonist back stories and often runs away from them to avoid becoming the villain of their stories.So to go from being obviously genre savvy and almost 4th wall breaking to being that clearly oblivious really undercut what I think is the best feature of the novel: a reincarnated person put in the shoes of the pretty generic son of a super powerful person that would most like become a super spoiled villain, recognizing the position they’re in, and actively trying not to be such a villain. That was actually the primary reason I started reading this series, and I really hope the author smooths this out as it could make the subplot more interesting for them to become suspicious of each other rather than all 3 being SUPER oblivious.

Me like book you should too read at own pace hope have enough words to submitNope need four more

Good job with this on. Keep up the good work and keep the books coming. I liked it thank you

It got better! I love when it gets silly, can't say more cause spoilers but don't drink anything while reading. Poor Xi Ri I feel your pain lol!

Well edited, some humor, I will not reread because not very entertaining but excellent proof reading. Good scruples against eating spirit beasts on part of hero.

A good entry into the book series, I am looking forward to seeing what happens in the next book released.

if you ar looking for some quick entertainment in the cultivation genre you might like this. only4 stars because the writing is a little stilted.

Ri horrores da referência do yugi-oh!E a batalha contra o dao?! Foi incrível!O desenvolvimento dos personagens, o desenvolvimento do plot sobre almas.A conversa do ancião Zhang com a pílula foi maravilhosa também.Desenvolvimento mãe e filho: na medida.Aliás amei a imagem extremamente bem colocada. Vê a ligação de ambos e sabendo como isso está se tornando única é maravilhoso.Eu estou curiosa para ler na versão Webnovel mas me conheço e sei que não vou conseguir reler depois a versão ebook.Vou ficar aguardando.

A decent cultivation story Not as much adventure as other but it is entertaining.More grammer errors than the first book though.