Alpha Ascendant: Alpha LitRPG, Book 2

The leveling is confusing and I hope the author takes the time to break it down in future installations. I would also like to see what progress is made instead of an entire stat sheet every time as I don’t memorize the sheet from previous showings. That is my only gripe. Extremely well written and very engaging. Unique story with a fantastic world. Engaging characters. Mr. Stone does a wonderful job fleshing out personal interactions, great story pacing, and the arch itself is fantastic. Great read.

The book was pretty good and I enjoyed the outside of the box thinking that the MC used in the book.

I titled this review the long road ahead because once you’re done with this book you will get the sense of just how far the main character has come and how far he has to go. It’s an excellent book we see more character development there is a nice plot twist you will likely enjoy and more action. All the things that make for a great five star book.There is a problem or at least I think it will be a problem time. In the story not much time passes. It is implied from the main character that lots of time let’s say 1-2 years needs to pass before he makes his BIG move. Well in this book you get the idea that maybe a month went by if you’re lucky. It just so happens his ambulate tracks days before it drains and when you look at how many days has passed from various events of the story you might come up with 30 days in this one book. Sewing begs the question how are we going to progress fast enough through the story before we get to what we’re all waiting for enlightenment. Don’t get me wrong we see some great character development but ultimately he’s weak and I worry about having to read several more books before he really gets going strength wise. It’s not a problem now but I’m worried about it becoming a problem with the teacher.

I really wish there was a "what happened in the previous book" at the start of this book. The leveling system is convoluted, but it works. You don't really have to pay attention to it too much. Just know that the MC is going to abuse it, that's his main plot armor. The characters are pretty well thought out and continue to be fleshed out. Beko, not so much though. I'm definitely going to read book 3.

I enjoyed this book it was entertaining and while the rpg elements were cumbersome it was easier to just skip ahead and see how they were used. I think a link in the book that takes you to the end with just a list of those skills for that chapter would help a lot. The books ending left me satisfied for the story but wanting for the next book. I’m excited to see this series continue.

I rather enjoyed the story. Has a few typos and a bit too much theory crafting for my taste though. Slowing things down a bit at times.

This book was a decent read. I am enjoying the series thus far. Only issues i have is the author gives too much detail describing things such as trees and whatnot, and the over explaining things that have already been explained. Even with these flaws i still enjoyed it. Cant wait for the next one.

I really enjoyed this continuation of the story. The inly complaint I have is that it took me a while to remember the mechanics of leveling in this world, having been a while since I'd read the first book. It would have been nice to include a bit of a refresher on that early on, as Ged was doing some of his leveling. Still, not a huge deal if you're reading the books back to back, and now I definitely want to read book 3.

I still don't understand the mechanics of the magic but I still enjoyed it! I always bet on the underdog! I can't say much because of the spoilers! Keep up with the good work! Thank you very much for this book! I can't wait for the next book!

A very good read indeed full of fun and gloom as well .well written and very compelling story ,well I enjoyed it and am moving on to the next one love it

There are too many litrpg books out now, and over 90% of them are trash, and then there are some series which turn from first class entertainment to pure hair pulling misery. This book is the second excellent book in the series, so that's 2 out of 2 - I hope the author can keep it that way.

Love this author's work. Im looking forward to more in the series and finding out where Ged ends up next

Different approach to the genre that is well written and keeps you reading till the end. Approach to the genre is different in a good way. Must read the first book before reading second.