Joe Carpenter and the Soul Of The Lost Artifact (The lost artifact trilogy)

First, let me say that further editing should be done as there's many 'mistakes' that need correcting. Misspellings and other structural and grammatical errors detract from the experience of reading this book.That said, the story is a fantastical tale of possibilities filled with fundamental ideals of the human race and historical records that people are still trying to understand thousands of years later. Statements in the book are great ideas for understanding.I enjoyed reading this book although there were passages I had trouble with due to lack of editing. I have mixed feelings about the ending. It kind of drops off like an essay with a conclusion of a single sentence.With a little more work, this could be a captivating read. The characters are great and the descriptions are full and provide the reader with a clear picture of what is happening. It makes the reader think about the possibility of greater things that may be achieved and explained alternative realities in a believable way. It sparks the imagination in a good way.

The consistent misspelling of 'in fact' drove me into anguish and frustration. The plot is consistent and well developed. The end is both sad and glorious.

I'm really not a snob, but there were spelling errors on almost every page of the book. This really took away from the story. Everyone time I started getting lost in the plot, another poorly spelled word brought me back to reality.

A conflagration of pseudo scientific ideas interwoven with spiritual understanding to create a page turning story of adventure, archeology, secretive under ground bases, love, and saving humanity from itself.

Good theme it's a little slow at times but good reading for cold winter days, I would recommend it to a friend.

would like to see more editing as I lose concentrationwhen a word is incomplete or misspelled, otherwise a great read!!

The book was an enjoyable read. It kept me captivated and on my feet through the whole book. I didn't want to put the book down.

Great story though a tad boring in certain places . The overall concept was good. Looking forward to a sequel to this book.

For the most part I couldn't put it down. The first half was particularly engaging as I love history of the Ancient world and adventure. It spoiled it for me at the end when the implosion consumed lives of many people. I didn't like it at all. I'd make it disintegrate painlessly into thin air. Also I didn't like the idea of the whole planet being populated by people with impure DNA. I happen to love human race in all it's imperfection. Theses 'll last notes are more for the author. As for readers, I'd compel you to read it this story as it is fascinating!

Really enjoyed this book good reading

Held my interest from start to finish - couldn't put it down.. Looking forward to more from this author. A few tweeks here and there and it would have been a five from me

Took me to places of thought I'd never even considered. A must read for anyone with a sense of adventure.

found it hard to get into

This book may well have the best story in the world to tell, but unfortunately I cannot bring myself to continue beyond chapter 4; believe me when I say I have tried to persevere. Having read hundreds of books , I have to place this one at the top of the list for the worst abuse of the English language I have had the misfortune to encounter - no idea how to properly construct a sentence and, inappropriate and absent punctuation, If the author at all - and I suspect he didn't - employed the services of a proof-reader/ copy-editor, then I would advise they didn't do their job.It is a shame because I thought there was potentially a good story.